WRITING ESSAY EXERCISE 2

 

Exercise 2.  Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Please write by following the framework below;

I. Introduction

A. Background information on the topic

B. Thesis statement

II. Advantages of an enjoyable job 

A. Improved job satisfaction and well-being 

B. Greater motivation and commitment to work 

C. Better work-life balance

III. Advantages of a high salary 

A. Financial security and stability 

B. Ability to afford a comfortable lifestyle 

C. Increased opportunities for personal growth and development

IV. Disadvantages of an enjoyable job 

A. May not provide financial stability or growth 

B. Can be difficult to find and secure 

C. May require significant sacrifices and risks

V. Disadvantages of a high salary

 A. May lead to job dissatisfaction and burnout 

B. May require long working hours and high stress levels 

C. May limit personal fulfillment and happiness

VI. Balanced Approach 

A. The importance of both job enjoyment and financial stability 

B. How to achieve a balanced approach

 C. The benefits of a balanced approach

VII. Opinion 

A. Personal opinion on the topic

 B. Reasons for the opinion 

C. Supporting evidence for the opinion

VIII. Conclusion 

A. Summary of the main points 

B. Restate the thesis statement 

C. Final thoughts on the topic

Here are some tips to help you write a good essay on this topic:

1. Make sure you understand the task and the topic clearly.

2. Use relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments.

3. Organize your essay in a logical and coherent way.

4. Use appropriate vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly.

5. Check your essay for errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar before submitting it.

I hope this framework helps you write a well-structured and thoughtful essay.