WRITING ESSAY EXERCISE 9

 

EXERCISE 9. Some people think that international travel is a waste of time and money, and that we should instead focus on exploring our own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 here's a framework for writing an essay on the topic "Some people think that international travel is a waste of time and money, and that we should instead focus on exploring our own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?":

I. Introduction A. Background information on the topic B. Thesis statement

II. Advantages of international travel A. Exposure to different cultures and customs B. Opportunities for personal growth and development C. Educational benefits

III. Advantages of exploring our own country A. Cost-effectiveness B. Increased appreciation for our own culture and heritage C. Opportunities for discovery and adventure

IV. Disadvantages of international travel A. High costs B. Potential for culture shock and discomfort C. Security risks

V. Disadvantages of exploring our own country A. Limited exposure to different cultures and customs B. Lack of educational opportunities C. Potential for monotony and boredom

VI. Importance of balance A. The benefits of balancing international travel and exploring our own country B. Challenges in achieving balance

VII. My opinion A. My view on the topic B. Reasons for my opinion C. Supporting evidence for my opinion

VIII. Conclusion A. Summary of the main points B. Restate the thesis statement C. Final thoughts on the topic

Here are some tips to help you write a good essay on this topic:

1. Make sure you understand the task and the topic clearly.

2. Use relevant examples and evidence to support your arguments.

3. Organize your essay in a logical and coherent way.

4. Use appropriate vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly.

5. Check your essay for errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar before submitting it.

I hope this framework helps you write a well-structured and thoughtful essay!